Saturday 30 November 2013

100 world challenge ( past tense diary)

Yesterday i was walking down a road when i spotted my van had been damaged so me and my wife had to walk back.On the way home i saw a very tall house with smashed windows then i suddenly remembered!
" We can not be here, run!" But it was to late they had seen us ... We ran as fast as we could  then we found our cottage not long till we get there. Meanwhile some angry men were chasing us shouting
" Stop, stop come back here!" Now we could see it, the cottage just there. But the door was open how could this happen?...
by Katie 

Friday 29 November 2013

I can use the past tense[as a diary,100 word challenge]

Last night there was someone in my house.Firstly I called the police!They sent someone,but he acted like he had seen the person before...How?What is going on?Anyway now I'm in a hotel the police rented for me,but I don't have any of my stuff.Like clothes.On the bright side I get to go shopping.Finally the police are telling me what's going on.Apparently he was an old mission for the police but they never caught him.He was on the run for robbing a shop,twice!When will they catch him?
By Caitlin

Friday 15 November 2013

100 word challenge

Children in need day is a hit at st johns!Everyone had  to wear either a superhero costume or in there pajamas.Here is a group of fantastic friends celebrating children in need day.
"I think children in need day needs to be celebrated all over the world!" protested Olivia.How many people does children in need help?Pudsey has travelled around around the world which has encouraged me, I'm not sure about you though.He has helped kid's live and without him children will die.I think he needs a big cheer .How many people do you think he's saved?
By Caitlin.

Saturday 9 November 2013

100 word challenge

 One day a gentleman was walking peacefully down a path next to the River Mersey. Suddenly he heard a strange noise he looked behind him not concentrating when he stumbled on a rock and tumbled down into the River Mersey!
"Help, help me somebody." he said shouting at the top of his voice. Sadly no one came to help him. The current was strong and was pulling him under. This time he shouted even louder
"Help, help anybody. But this time someone replied the person rushed over and helped him get out by lying down and pulling him with all his strength, the man thanked him and went on his way.
by Katie

Friday 8 November 2013

100 word challenge

11th September, there was a gentleman who fell in the river Mersey. No one knows what happend, except an old woman who screamed!She told us at her interview.She said
''It was horrible, he was drowning.It looked like he was dead!
Everyone was in a panic wondering who it was.Nobody Knew who it was.Nobody at all.I ask you do if this happend to someone you know?Would you be petrified?What would you do if it was your dad or your sister or neighbor or your brother or even you?
by Caitlin
100 word chalinge



The inpachent male walked swthly by the river mersy in his green hunter boots.
After that he slipt on a leaf  and fell into the damp and wet river.
HELP HELP''! he shouted and opend his eyes and the water was only 32 center meaters tall
and he said,
''BLIND ME FO BEAING SUTCH A FOOL'',
he said for the last time.He sloly and gently got up and took a big step out of the river and
whisberd to himself
''what a fool i hav been;; and he walked home and said hou stupid
by remaya campbell
 

Tuesday 5 November 2013

Year 5's assembly

Year 5 has been rehersing our assembly. We have been working very hard and we are all excited about tomorrow's assembly. We hope parents and friends can attend tomorrow. From year 5