Suspence writing

Evie stood`frozen`glancing at the churning dishwasher`the staffroom was full of mugs and cakes. She looked through the window on the door she had just closed.A leak from the ceiling slowly dripped down,landing in the overflowing bucket,the table was full of grains of sugar and coffee and tea cup stains.There was a mauntian of spilt sugar from the day before ,and a line of untidy chairs not tucked under the 5 metre table. Very tidy postits all in a line on the wall,the naughty board.All of a sudden another wire fell and dangled from under the clock now there were six or seven that had fallen down.Suddenly the clock fell down,how would she reaturn safely without the key.
By Evie