Monday 1st June
Today I was doing some maths work for the School mathematician
club when I was rudely interrupted by my dad,he brought me a toy,It wasn't the best
toy ever.After I looked at it and I wanted to make something but better than
this old thing.I decided I would create something called a computer,it would be a electrical screen
that you can do millions of things on,It was a genius idea!
I rushed to the hardware store to get supply's, not that they would understand.
When I got home I couldn't wait.I did some planning for the rest of the day and
it was going to take a long time to make.
By,Adam
very very good words and
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Your blog is very interesting and fun to read. Your spellings and punctuation are very good.
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by Haleema.R
I really liked your post and enjoyed it. I also like your use of words and your punctuation. Keep up your posts. I don't mean to be rude but to improve put spaces after each full stop.
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I really like your blog,It's really interesting and your choice of words are really good.
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nice keep up the good work olivia b
ReplyDeleteYour blog was an awesome peice of work! I like the way you wrote a diary of charles babbage (The man who created a computer)on the blog.
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