Two days ago on chirstmas day there was a huge fight against german and british men were coliding togather to protect there ouragos country.
That morning the soldiers had this hot lovley breakfast and had to barb there hair with rugghed shavers and also they had this scruffy chirstmas tree.After the football match the commander gave some presents to the soilders and they all opend the present quietly.
When they started the match the rugged ball rolled over and the players dived for it while the commanders stood there anxousley like they wanted to play.When jim kicked the ball it landed near the commander so the commander said come on pick it up but jim was shaking like he wanted to brake out of the freezer.At the end the commander said come on time to go back into the trench and they were all happy. By vanessa
That morning the soldiers had this hot lovley breakfast and had to barb there hair with rugghed shavers and also they had this scruffy chirstmas tree.After the football match the commander gave some presents to the soilders and they all opend the present quietly.
When they started the match the rugged ball rolled over and the players dived for it while the commanders stood there anxousley like they wanted to play.When jim kicked the ball it landed near the commander so the commander said come on pick it up but jim was shaking like he wanted to brake out of the freezer.At the end the commander said come on time to go back into the trench and they were all happy. By vanessa
This is a lovely peice of writing well done vanessa
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