Wednesday 26 June 2013

My diary post of Charles Babbage(father of computing)

            


                   Monday 1st June
          Today I was doing some maths work for the School mathematician
club when I was rudely interrupted by my dad,he brought me a toy,It wasn't the best
toy ever.After I looked at it and I wanted to make something but better than 
this old thing.I decided I would create something called a computer,it would be a electrical screen 
that you can do millions of things on,It was a genius idea!
I rushed to the hardware store to get supply's, not that they would understand.
When I got home I couldn't wait.I did some planning for the rest of the day and 
it was going to take a long time to make.


By,Adam
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6 comments:

  1. Mersey Vale Year Five1 July 2013 at 04:04

    very very good words and
    good puctuation

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  2. Mersey Vale Year Five1 July 2013 at 06:40

    Your blog is very interesting and fun to read. Your spellings and punctuation are very good.
    your choice of words are good aswell.

    by Haleema.R

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  3. Mersey Vale Year Five2 July 2013 at 01:27

    I really liked your post and enjoyed it. I also like your use of words and your punctuation. Keep up your posts. I don't mean to be rude but to improve put spaces after each full stop.

    :) Aqib.H

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  4. Mersey Vale Year Five2 July 2013 at 01:31

    I really like your blog,It's really interesting and your choice of words are really good.

    A.M

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  5. Mersey Vale Year Five2 July 2013 at 01:33

    nice keep up the good work olivia b

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  6. Mersey Vale Year Five2 July 2013 at 01:41

    Your blog was an awesome peice of work! I like the way you wrote a diary of charles babbage (The man who created a computer)on the blog.

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